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 Post subject: A Nymph's Life
 Post Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 2:35 pm 
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MYLENE MAMA
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Winter has sharp teeth.
Leaves me so pale you can see my heart beat.
Let this dawn break hard,
and knock the snarl of frost from his bitter face.

I skulk through the anchored earth,
craving to occupy the thin stains of light coruscating across this defection.
To lull in the glimmer the day has propositioned.
That I may recoil in it's tepidness in hopes of thawing the icy anima I've kept
hidden beneath my skirt, this whole time.

Charm's lips have chapped.
Leaves my tongue summoned for dew when there is only sap.
Let this bile flood,
and force my caterwauling to breach this manifested levee.

I pray for nectarous lucidity.
And beg this cerebral engine to unmask my radiance.
Let this inner light erupt from between my brows, sending this glaciation
blazing.
Burn the whole thing down.


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 Post subject: Re: A Nymph's Life
 Post Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 4:45 am 
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Very well written and it flows nicely.
The 2nd and last stanzas are especially amazing and strong.

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 Post subject: Re: A Nymph's Life
 Post Posted: Wed Dec 15, 2010 10:40 am 
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Thanks!


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 Post subject: Re: A Nymph's Life
 Post Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:16 am 
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I just read this while listening to Pelican's "Last Day of Winter"


it synced nicely haha

AWESOME!

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 Post subject: Re: A Nymph's Life
 Post Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2011 9:44 pm 
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Thats pretty damn rad Daniel. Thanks so much!


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 Post subject: Re: A Nymph's Life
 Post Posted: Sat Aug 17, 2013 1:48 am 
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I pray for nectarous lucidity. :ugeek:

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 Post subject: Re: A Nymph's Life
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Naveed123 wrote:
I pray for nectarous lucidity. :ugeek:

I don't even know what this means.


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 Post subject: Re: A Nymph's Life
 Post Posted: Sun Aug 18, 2013 1:26 pm 
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RickAccused wrote:
Naveed123 wrote:
I pray for nectarous lucidity. :ugeek:

I don't even know what this means.

Nectarous lucidity will be my next band name


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